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Sex duh

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Tear flows, eyes close, everybody knows, starts to grow, victime and prey, warm air, only today, eyes glair, hunger together, lost in time, never forever, simple crime, violent hour, muffled sound, rising tower, no ground, sweat pours, nothing to say, locked doors, rough play, hard bite, getting fast, cold night, will never last, no more pain, low scream, crashing train, end of scene
So pretty much everyone guessed this one right and that sucks cuz the goal was for people to NOT know what it's about and guess at it.

So I used a new rhyming scheme than usual/ Nomraly I do "AA,BB,CC,DD..."

Example:
I lied
She cried
I walk
She trys to talk
I don't care
She can only stair

But this time in order to make it more confusing I did "A,B,A,B,C,D,C,D"
Example:
Sora falls through glass
Kairi has a smile on her face
Riku is being a ass
Sora shoulda won the Race


I cant remember what he named the boat.....

I only like poetry with rhyming so sorry to people who don't rhyme but yo SHOULD be rhyming.

And Haiku's aren't poetry!
Example:
Haiku's are Stupid
Anyone can make a haiku
I like Turtles alot

randomness: my favorite poem is "The Raven' by Edgar Allen Poe

"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou," I said, "art sure no craven,
Ghastly grim and ancient Raven wandering from the Nightly shore-"

Not that's real poetry
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TheHideousBirdchild's avatar
It's the end of the world, or it might as well be, and these two's dying action is sex. Passionate, desperate, scandalous, illicit sex. And they don't care who knows.