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Neon Remnants'
TWILIGHT CORE©
part 1

In the year of 2532

In the planet Arem, The Darem Empire, a country mainly inhabited by Vampires and Lonques (a rare breed of Vampire) controls the majority of the land while Destonia, a country controlled mainly inhabited by Tearas (magical women), controls the rest. The queen of  Darem,Queen Reoko the Second, was assassinated by the Silver Angle, a Teara assassin, along with her only daughter Raona, while they slept. No one actually saw the assassination and Raona body was never found, but after 3 years of searching she is now labeled as dead.

With The Darem Empire's queen and only heir assassinated, the country had no ruler so Tidera the leader of the Moon Knights, took over as king and made his 3 brothers generals. The 2 countries live side by side and the world of Darem seems to be  peaceful, even though King Tideras army and weapons seem to get bigger and bigger each passing year...
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June 13th, 2532 a Solar Eclipse is seen through out the entire world.
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Lonques and Tearas

Lonques are a rare breed of vampire that have more powers then regular ones. Instead of only pale or light skin their skin can be virtually any color.  Their hair color can be any color. In special cases certain Lonques' hair colors have been know to repeatedly change. Some even take the form of elements (fire, water exc.).  The average life span of a Lonque is 150, but stronger Lonques tend to live longer. A Lonque can only age if they choose. Unlike vampires, No one can be turned into Lonques, they can only be born. Their have been cases of humans who have given birth to a Lonque.

Tearas are a magical race that can only be females, their are no male Tearas and their never has been one. If a Teara were to have sexual intercourse with a male of any race or species then their power would go away and they would become human. Tearas are look almost exactly like humans except more beautiful and their hair tend to me more exotic. The tend to wear organic colors of clothing and their hair can be any color except black. Their powers tend to involve levitating objects, controlling organic material and elements and changing the weather slightly. Tearas can only be born form to Tearas and can not be born from any other races or species. In case you were wondering they are a lesbian race, although there are a lot of straight ones who just don't have sex.

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June 16th, 2532

3 days after the Solar Eclipse

In fair Darem Suruma Pegoto laid down on top of a roof staring up at the clouds watching them. He was on top of a tall skyscraper with a pearl roof that shined blue, because the near by ocean reflected off of it. Crows circled above his head, silent and mystical.

Suruma's silver hair blew through the wind. He was a 19 year old Lonque. He was 6 feet tall and he wore a combination of royal blue-metal armor and casual clothes. His birthday was on June 13th the day of the solar eclipse.

Across the world all Lonques and Tearas felt a wave go through their bodies during the eclipse. They left their houses and got out of their hover cars all to stare up at the unique event. It was a world phenomena.

Suruma stood up and walked to the ledge of the building. He began to walk down the wall of the tall skyscraper as if it were a regular sidewalk something only the most powerful of Lonques could do. When he finally reached the ground he headed towards his house, making his way through the moving town of Byakkoya. Vampires and humans walked the busing sidewalks and drove down the rodes of the afternoon day. Neon lights shining, trying to get the attention of passerbyers so they can buy the stores Serum, coffee, toys and other things they sold. Suruma walked in a smoothie store and bought a banana strawberry smoothie. The cashier, a young woman who was pretty good looking, for a human, asked him if he wanted to buy some Serum.

"Sorry, Baby. I only drink the real stuff. Not that imitation crap," Suruma said. He looked back at the women and a smile appeared on his face. "That reminds me. I am thirsty".

Ten minutes later he finished drinking the girls blood. He left here in the back of the smoothie stored where she sat trying to regain herself. When a vampire drinks your blood if feels good, but when a Lonque drinks your blood its orgasmic. A lot of vampires who can't convince a human to agree to let them drink their blood or don't want the Slayers, a group of humans who track down law breaking vampires and Lonques, after them, just settle for regular food or Serum. Few humans will deny a Lonque though. If you wanted to be turned into a vampire you'd half to let a vampire or Lonque drink your blood and then you half to drink theirs.

Suruma made his way up the hill to his house. Normally he would drive up up but today he felt like walking. Suruma's mansion was like a small castle with random art designs and black marble walls. Josue, Pan, Kyoko, Miaku and Chris lived with him. From their house on the hill they could see the entire city of Byakkoya, the capital of Darem.

Pan sat in a arm chair outside painting a naked Kyoko. Both of them were Tearas and they were lovers. Pan was a 5.6 feet tall, pale and skinny. She had long blackish red hair and she loved to paint and write. Kyoko was 5.4 with the body of a model and Blond hair. Besides being Pan's model, Suruma didn't really know what she did because she rarely ever talked.

Suruma walked pass the two, cursing the Teara's rule for men, like most men do when they see a the beautiful and magical women. He entered his house witch was filled with art and posters. Random cats ran through the house and a  red fox said laid in front of the stairs. It yawned and got up when it saw Suruma it followed Suruma upstairs. Only the fox's steps could be herd going up the smooth polished white marble stairs.

"Hay, Suruma! How's it goin'  man?" Josue said. He was drunk and probably high.

"What's up, Josue"  Suruma said with a forced smile. "Do you know where Chris is?".

Josue rocked back in forth in place and scratched his head. The drugs were obviously effecting his memory. "Ahhh, he's probably out having a good time partying with woman that son of a B#*$%".

Suruma walked to his room and flopped down on his bed, the fox laid on the rug in front of it. Suruma herd a soft knock at his door. At first he saw the sound as a nuisance because it meant he had to answer it instead of sleeping, but then he realized by the softness of the knock who it must be.

"Hay, Suruma. Feeling a little melancholic today?" Miaku, a Lonque, asked softly, just like her knock.

"Yeah, I've been thinking..." Suruma answered.

"Want some company tonight?" Miaku asked. A suddle offer for her to sleep with him.

"Yeah, I do..." Suruma answered.

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Raona walked down a long hallway silently. Her raven blue hair flowing as she swiftly moved through the hallway. She was a Lonque, and a very powerful one too. Her automatic gun was in hand and her sword was ready to be drawn any second.

She was going through a abandon apartment building searching for the "Black Deaths". Raona sighed in frustrations when he first herd the name. They were just a bunch of weak vampires who raped and killed a couple of human, and the only reason the Slayers hadn't blown them to pieces was because their leader was a Lonque. Slayers don't mess with Lonques. So now here Raona was, making her way to the pests, so she could step on them.

Raona bussed through the door and began firing. She was immediately rushed by vampires who died moments after they had gotten up. To a human they were fast. To Raona they were barely even moving.

F&#&ng half-breeds" she said as she quickly killed  them. They were obviously born humans and were made into vampires.

Raona drew her sword. The Lonque leader of the Black Deaths sword collided with hers. His speed was a whole lot faster, but still slow compared to Raona. The Lonques corpse fell to the head.

15 minutes later and Raona was in the Slayers' headquarters dropping the heads of the Black Deaths off. Her blue and purple armor shined in the light of the room, and didn't have a single smug on it after destroying the great "Black Deaths".

"Think you so much Ray! Those guys were really causing us some trouble"  Mitchell Harnegan, the Slayers' captain, said to her.

"Yeah, what ever" Raona replied.

She took her check and left. She walked down the streets of Byakkoya wondering what she was going to do for the rest of the day. She stopped to see a man walking out of a building. A woman laid on the floor behind him. The man had clearly just finished sucking her blood. His blowing silver hair and the look of a man who is untouchable screamed Lonque. The man made a turn into a ally and Raona began to follow him to find out what he was up to. He turned a corner and Raona followed but their was no one there.

"You following me?" the man whispered into her ear. 'No one can sneak up behind me' Raona thought.

Instead of turning around and attacking him like she was trained, she just turned around and saw the man's smug grin.

"Who are you?" she asked.

"Normally I would identify that it is rude to follow someone and ask their name before introducing yourself, but by your shocked expression that your trying to hide, I can tell that you weren't expecting me to be so fast. So, instead of playing games I will answer your question. I am Suruma Pegoto," the man answered.

Raona nearly jumped from the shock of his identity. "T-t-the..... Reincarnates!"

"Ah, you've herd of me!" Suruma said.

"The bloodline of orphan sons. A entire bloodline of orphan sons named after their fathers" Raona said. The information she had learned so long ago rushing to her head. "Your Suruma Roxas Pegoto the 27th..."

"Exactamoondo! Now it's your turn to tell me who you are," Suruma said.

"I'm Raona" she replied.

"Your majesty!' Suruma said as he mockingly bowed. His smile got bigger as her face filled with shock.

"How do you know who I am?!" Raona asked.

"I know the people who helped you go into hiding," Suruma answered.

After Raona's mother, the queen, was assassinated and The Sliver Angle had shown mercy on her, she had to go into hiding because Tidera would kill her so he could seize the throne. Raona was sent to live in the mountains of Darem where she was trained by Sairon. Now that she thought of it she remembered that Sairon was Suruma the 26th's apprentice.

"Your father's apprentice told you" Raona said. Suruma nodded.

Suruma and Raona walked through the city talking.

"So why haven't you taken the throne and became queen yet?" Suruma asked.

"Well... I decided that I don't want the throne. I'm not saying I don't want to be queen, it's just I don't want to just inherit a kingdom because of who my mother is. You know... I like want to become a queen because of what I did, not who I was. Do you know what I mean?" she asked.

"Yeah, you don't want people to think your so spoiled brat who was born with power. You want people to think that you earned the throne"  Suruma said.

"Yes, that's it!" Raona said. Two Tearas walked in between them.

"So do you have a boyfriend?" Suruma asked as a Lonque walked around him.

"Uh, No, but I..." Raona stopped in mid sentence as she noticed all the Lonques and Tearas seemed to be going in the same direction. Then Raona realized she didn't know where they were walking to. "Where are we going?"

"I don't know we just started walking in this direction," Suruma answered. Even though they realized they were just walking randomly they didn't.

"Hay! Where is everyone walking to?" Suruma asked a Lonque.

"I don't know . I just started walking in this direction. Like I'm being pulled or something,"  the Lonque said.

"What's going on?" Raona asked as they walked.

"I don't know it's weird..." Suruma answered.

After like a hour more of walking and the son went down all the Lonques and Tearas stopped.

"It's over! What the heck just happened?" Suruma asked looking at all the confused faces. Suruma and Raona were in a different town.

"Were we walking that fast? I don't recognize this city..." Raona said.

"Me neither. I'm gonna buy a hotel room. Do you want me to buy one for you?" Suruma asked.

"No, that's okay I can buy my own," Raona answered. The two walked to a hotel and they  each bought a room. Their rooms were on the same floor and three rooms apart. They said good night and the torture began.

When Lonques desired other Lonques it became something that could drive a normal person. Lonques constantly lusted for people and objects, but the lust for another Lonque becomes overwhelming me. All Lonques attract the opposite sex at a high extent. That is why few people deny them when they want to drink a human's blood. And a Lonque's entire life is based on his desires, and right now Suruma only desired the Lonque Princess Raona.

He paced back and forth through his room, pumping with adrenalin. Through a humans eyes he look like a blur. Suddenly someone knocked at his door witch was answered by Suruma in less then a second.

"Your passing through your room," Raona said quickly with the same excited expression Suruma had.

"You are too," Suruma said talking more quickly then Raona.

"I'm-" Raona began but she found her self kissing Suruma before she could finish.

The two kissed with passion and lust. Raona's tongue slipped down Suruma's throat and Suruma wrapped his arms around her. They quickly made their way to Suruma's bed still locked together in passion.

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"I just met you..." Raona said as she laid in the bed with Suruma after they had sex. Suruma laughed.

"Do you regret sleeping with me?" Suruma asked.

"No, It was amazing, but... I mean we just met, and you were my first..." Raona said.

"Cool. I deflowered a princess" Suruma said jokingly.  

"Am I a whore?" Raona asked.

"Nope, Your just a Lonque with a desire. And Lonques don't like denying their desires" Suruma said as he lit a cigarette. Raona took the cigarette right out of his mouth and put it in hers.

"I guess so..." Raona said after taking a long puff. "this isn't a regular cigarette is it?"

Suruma chuckled as he got on top of her and began kissing her neck.

In the afternoon they left the hotel and began exploring the town.

"So what do we do?" Raona asked.

"I don't know. I wounder if were all start walking again, so let's check out this city and wait to see if it happens again," Suruma answered.

The two walked around the town. They visited all the interesting shops and ate at a Chinese food restaurant called "Shu-Foo". As they walked Raona spotted a sword and knife store

"Oh, my F$%#ing gosh, look at that beautiful sword," Raona said.

Suruma grunted. "Please, my sword is way better," Suruma said as he poled out a big hand gun that turned into a sword.

"Wow, where'd you get that sword from?" Raona said as she admired the sword.

"Made it myself," Suruma said.

Raona pulled out her sword witch was blue and silver and  was encrusted with crystals. "This my mother sword. It's the only sword I'll ever use."

"Well look at what we have here. Suruma found himself  another girlfriend," a man said behind them. He had black spiky hair and was all most as tall as Suruma.

"Mikid-E-dee! Look who's in town. Nathan I was expecting to run into you eventually," Suruma said with a mischievous grin. The two Lonques began to walk in a circle, each of them watching their every move.

"Yes, I new that this "unique" series of events would have us meet again too" Nathan said.

"Suruma who is this guy?" Raona asked.

"Nathan the 27th. His father killed my father," Suruma answered.

Nathan and Suruma have been rivals ever since the 1st Nathan and the 1st Suruma met. A rivalry that kept going with each generation. Nathan red and silver sword suddenly appeared in his hand.

The two leaped at each other swords raised. The two swords clashed and were immediately brought back and clashed again. Nathan tried to kick Suruma off his feet, but Suruma leaped in to the air and did 3 spins in the air before landing on the ground to strike again. Suruma blocked his attack and he threw a punch at Suruma. Suruma spun around like a ice skater and tried to kick Nathan, but he grabbed his foot. All of this happened so fast that Raona was the only one who could see the actual fight.

After the two stopped fighting they shook hands. "You've gotten good," Suruma said.

"So have you..." Nathan turned around and began to walk away. "Sayonara, Suruma and Princess Raona."

"Smart A$$ mother F#$*er" Suruma said as he watched Nathan walk away.

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When twilight came all the Lonques and Tearas began walking.



"What time is it?" Raona asked as they walked.

"6:13," Suruma sad as he looked at his watch. Suruma and Raona were holding hands as they walked and there was a couple watching them.

"Ah, when did you two meet?" a woman who was a Lonque asked.

"Last night..." Suruma said with a guilty smile.

"Us too," she said pointing at the man next to her. "We met during the last walk, and... Well you know what it's like."

"You know it starts at twilight. All the Lonques, all the Tearas in the world are walking to the same spot at the same time. I think it's because of the eclipse"  the Lonque next to the woman said.

"It's unbelievable! It's like were being drawn to something," the woman said.

"What are we being drawn to?" Raona asked the two.

"I don't know, but I intend to find out," the man said.

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Kira the Silver Angle flew above the rest of the migrating crowed. Her titanium wings flapped in the air as she scan all the Lonques and Tearas. One of them was identified as Suruma.

A evil smile appeared on Kira's face. "Target acquired."

Kira noticed a woman walking next to him and she recognized her from somewhere. "Princess Raona. We meet again..."

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Suruma stopped in has tracks and looked up at the sky. His sword suddenly appeared in his hand, as the flying figure in the sky began to descend.

The figure was flying down to the ground so fast that she looked like a meteor. Kira's feet touched the ground as if she were a feather.

Kira was 5.8 feet tall and covered in silver armor. Her short white hair flowed though the wind as her giant metal wings raised in the air. The winged Teara looked like a silver angle.

"Hello, nice to see you guys again,"  Kira said as she raised a hand gun with a giant barrel and pointed it at Suruma.

She polled the trigger and a crystal ball shot out of it. Suruma moved to dogde it but it expanded in front of Suruma and consumed him Suruma was trapped inside a giant orb.

Raona pulled out her sword.

"Hold on Princess, I'm just here to capture Suruma,"  Kira said.

"You killed my mother, and I'm not going to let you kill him" Raona said, eyes full of hate and rage.

"You plan to kill me?" Kira asked with a evil laugh.  "Simple Lonque, I was 4 human years old when i kill your mother. In Teara years that's 16. I was one of the list of greatest assassins ever when I was only 4 years old. You plan to kill me  now, when I am 18 years old, and 18 times better than I was then. Please B#*$^. Don't make me laugh."

Raona charged at Kira. Her attack was shielded by one of Kira's titanium wings. Kira laughed as she pulled out her sword. Kira came at Raona with a series of attacks and Raona could only block a couple of them. Raona's blood dripped on to the ground.

"15 seconds of fighting with me and your already bleeding. How disappointing..." Kira said.

She hit Raona with four more attacks, and Raona fell to the ground. Suruma broke through the orb and attacked Kira. Kira jumped into the air in shock at the speed of the attack. Before she could even react she was hit again. A piece of her armor fell to the ground.

"What the Fu-" Kira's sentence were interrupted  by Suruma slashing her chest. A long cut in her armor appeared on her armor and blood dripped out of it. Kira spun in the air knocking Suruma back. She flew up high in the air running away from him. Suruma raised his hand and lightening struck Kira's wings. Sparks of lightening flowed through Kira as she activated the hyper drive on her wings.

Kira blasted away and out of sight as Suruma ran to Raona.

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"F$#%! F^&%!! F%%*(%$#^!!!!!!!!!!!" Kira screamed as she arrived at the Darem Royal Palace. She busted through the doors of King Tidera's chamber.

"I told you he was powerful..." King Tidera said calmly.

"Not that F&%*ing powerful!!!" Kira yelled.

"Calm down. You can beat him. If I didn't believe you were a great assassin I would have never gave you this mission and I would have never told you to kill Queen Reoko and her daughter. You killed the Queen and her daughter, so now you will capture Suruma."

Kira began to think about the consequences if King Tidera found out that she sparred the Princess's life.



To be continued....



If you would like to write your own chapter go to Twilight Core in the Project Mayhem page

If u would like to read more of SURUMA"S TALE then go to Project Mayhem and read "The continuation of Suruma's Tale".

I apologize it nothing has been posted yet.
I don't think I'm gonna continue the story so if you want to continue it just ask me.

This is a different time line for my usual stories and Hinata doesn't exist in this one

if u wanna know what Tearas and Lonques look like then go to

[link]

thats where I originally posted my story and I created that website [link]
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cool, very detailed, I like this very much so